llamawhodraws's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Commission]

really cute! love the hair and the expression.
you should work on your anatomy, the sweater has wrong creases making the torso look segmented, the crotch are is weird and it seems you have given this character an unrealistic thigh gap, and the hand should not be seen, as crossing your arms behind your back till the point i can see your hand means youve broken your back lmao.
but the colors are great! and the pose looks cool!
keep it up! <3

softperch responds:

Thank you for the feedback but this piece is almost 2 years old ;v;

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hey yo bro, i think u should make things more sleek,
like uve made the hair fluffy, shirt baggy, and pants all tent-looking, and the hands all big and bloate
i think u should try making more body fitting, and like more physics laws abiding shirt and hair,,,
also u should add shadows to ur art, it looks an unnatural level of 2D
and work a bit on anatomy and proportions,,, if u would like i could give u a roughly edited version to give u an idea of what im talking about,,,

NocturneReverie responds:

thanks for the feedback~ while i agree i do have issues with anatomy proportions and it iss something im getting better at. as well as the lack of shadows which is very helpful advice, as i have been feeling my drawings been fairly flat
as for the physics breaking/baggy clothes are partly due to 1. This character particularly being chaotic in every regard, having morphing/moving features and details to give an aura of unease from just looking at them, and 2. A stylistic, cartoonish style i've developed and have grown comfortable with
i appriciate the comment and offer and will carry this advice with me going forward, thank you!~

[Canal Volfield]

aye bruh, u should work on ur anatomy, the arms are too thin, the legs are too thin, the torso is too long, and her spine is doing back flips, and give her some forehead space.
tone down the brightness, and dont use white for highlighting everything, u can just use lighter shades of different colors.
use different colors for the lineart to match its colors.
love the concept, the pose, and the ammount of details uve added, especially in the clothes.
anyways, i think u can do it, keep up the gr8 work, i believe in u,
good luck!!

NickyVendetta responds:

Thanks for the input and being civil about it.

[Calypso Chamber]

oh geez, love the everything in this

Ruedefaux responds:

thank you~ definitely one of my favourites i've done this year.

[M A R I N A ?]

this shits lit bro, i love the shading and lighting and the colors used, keep it bro

Ruedefaux responds:

thank you :D

[TAKYON]

love the composition, and the concept, oh gandhis three monkeys, where the smoking man is symbolising the mouth closed monkey lmao. idk whats happening here, but i really like it alot, and how the art style is like a mix of the old mangas and american comics, and looks like a mix of japanese mafia, and american jungle war thing or guerilla warfare (lmao pun not intended)
im fucking dumb as shit so maybe i interpreted everything wrong, but regardless, im loving this (shits 10/10 lmao)

Ruedefaux responds:

omg HAHA. i enjoy your interpretation for sure XD theres not much happening here honestly, just an illustration of a dude and two monkies being odd, so its really up to you and what you think it is. thank you very much for your comment though c:

[oh, lamenting love]

shits gr8 bro

trashyvoid responds:

hell yeah thank you

[Merry Christmas 2016!]

this is superb

AnnaMatronic responds:

Thank you!

[Still Unnamed (up-close)]

looks great!
but i think u should change the color of the lineart
1. dealing with backgrounds, at the horizon, the sky and the land start having similar shade, so u know what to do!
2. make the sky lighter, and whiter,
3. the lining that seperates the sky and the field in the back ground should only be 3-5 shades darker than the green used for the grass.
4. the characters lneart should be changed according to her colors, making it all balck kind of makes the picture dull,
u can do it in two ways,
* use a dark color (here u can either use the greyish color of the shirt or the brown of her hair) for the entire lineart and then change its layer settings to overlay or some other options accordingly
* use 2-3 shades darker colors for the lineart of certain parts, like skin will have 2-3 sahdes darker towards red or orange, the hair towards brown or orange, etc..

but overall i love this alot!!
good luck!!

GhoulKitten responds:

Thanks for the review! :D
1.) Hmmmmm, probly.
2.) I didn't know what to do for the sky, really lol
3.) The background was given little to no consideration artistically tbh.
4.) I was considering changing the lineart to a dark saturated color, but I think it still stands alright being black. I've done this with previous illustrations in the past.

This art is just being used for a commission sheet I'm working on. :D
Thank you!

[Parasoul from skullgirls]

ok, so im just gonna tell whats wrong with the drawing and how to correct them
lets start from the top
the parasol has the worst shape ever, i think u should use more references,
her head shape is ok, but ull still have to work with the face
add more neck to her and make her shouders straight
her boobs are too big, but u couldve pulled it off if u put it in a proper shape
her hips are concave, it should look slightly hourglass
her thighs are uneven, her feet have been destroyed,
the colors are fine, and the shading too

good luck! i know ull improve!!

Shinyguy909 responds:

thank you for the critque