llamawhodraws's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Thank u, next]

This is so cute!

[Franken-Gal]

pretty fucking hot, but them boobs wrong, you have her laying down, but both them titties be showing; the right titty should be hidden by the left (which is towards us)
but the colors are beautiful, the pose is cool ans the expression is great!
really love this piece, keep it up!! <333

[Commission]

really cute! love the hair and the expression.
you should work on your anatomy, the sweater has wrong creases making the torso look segmented, the crotch are is weird and it seems you have given this character an unrealistic thigh gap, and the hand should not be seen, as crossing your arms behind your back till the point i can see your hand means youve broken your back lmao.
but the colors are great! and the pose looks cool!
keep it up! <3

softperch responds:

Thank you for the feedback but this piece is almost 2 years old ;v;

[Fortune Cookie]

nan desu ka is this?
ngl, this art is pretty damn good

[The Bunnifyers]

their faces are too long, with eyes too large and no chin and no forehead
their shoulders are too narrow, and their torsos are too short,
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all in all its okay,
good luck in the future

[Bunnygirl Luna Loud]

her hair isnt very smooth,
her shoulders are too narrow,
her breasts are too large,
her torso is too short,
the length of the leg part below knee should be equal to the length of the leg part above knee,
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otherwise the rest is cool
good luck on future pieces

[Lina Inverse Butt]

the anatomy and angle is a bit off, and the hair is defying laws
but the colors and composition is gr8!

[Cuddle Team Leader]

this is hilarious
love it,
10/10

[_REDACTED_ 2]

hey yo bro, i think u should make things more sleek,
like uve made the hair fluffy, shirt baggy, and pants all tent-looking, and the hands all big and bloate
i think u should try making more body fitting, and like more physics laws abiding shirt and hair,,,
also u should add shadows to ur art, it looks an unnatural level of 2D
and work a bit on anatomy and proportions,,, if u would like i could give u a roughly edited version to give u an idea of what im talking about,,,

NocturneReverie responds:

thanks for the feedback~ while i agree i do have issues with anatomy proportions and it iss something im getting better at. as well as the lack of shadows which is very helpful advice, as i have been feeling my drawings been fairly flat
as for the physics breaking/baggy clothes are partly due to 1. This character particularly being chaotic in every regard, having morphing/moving features and details to give an aura of unease from just looking at them, and 2. A stylistic, cartoonish style i've developed and have grown comfortable with
i appriciate the comment and offer and will carry this advice with me going forward, thank you!~

[Cayde-6]

i think u should make cleaner lines, and use different colors for shadow
dont use black grey shades,
use dark colors like dark blue, and then change the layer settings to multiply or any other accordingly