llamawhodraws's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Beach Girls]

ok! i love ur colors, characters and everything!
the shading is great, the anatomy, the poses, and lineart,,, its all pretty amazing, and im giving u full scores

but now ill tell u some tips on improvement (because this piece is amazing and i know u can do it better),
1. the lineart; the lineart uve done here is amazing! i reall love it, but the place uve gone wrong in this is the color of the lineart. the thickness and the amount of details is perfect, but the lineart's color! ruins it all...
what u should have done is,,, all the lines that do not belong to he character shouldve been colored a shade darker than what they are outlining (for eg, the sea lineart should have been only a shade darker than the sea)
and for the lineart of the characters they can be much darker, as they are the amain attention of the image,,,, u can choose an even dark color (like light brown maroon and change the layer settings to overlay or whatever) or u could lineart seperately, (skin outline 3-5 shades darker than skin, and the swimsuit outline 3-5 shades darker than swimsuit)

2. the back ground; i think u shouldve made the sky and the sand whiter
and the biggest tips here,,,, colors start merging on the horizon, so the sea and the sky will be only a few shades apart (the sky lighter, and the sea darker obviously lol)

3. the characters; the fat chick on the right isnt very good, her pose is slanted, her face is funny and the proportions are slightly off. but the other two are okay,,, but i still think the middle girl should be slightly taller, according to her head and torso

4. perspective; i think the girl who is sitting should look smaller, and slightly more back away, (according to the number of footsteps uve made.)

other than that, im really loving this piece (and i think its still a 5/5 stars lmao)
good luck! i hope to see improvement!!

[think]

great art! i love the pose, and the colors alot!!
but i think u should practice more on how to color clothes, like her jeans should have crisscross design, rather than looking glossy, and the shadows on the shit should be more block and simplistic rather than airbrush/blurred
and i think the eyes look slightly cross, and the hair is just defying the laws of physics
and the amount of thigh gap she has is unreal bro, its like her hips dislocated and a baby could drop down any minute.
also the last thing, u should make ur lineart slightly more visible in the face area, cuz the body and other elements have solid lineart, but 0 on the face

but all in all, i like this character!
good luck!

[Fatso's Soft Serve Shop]

damn, this is so good???? and so hot???? wow??
i love the character, the pose, the composition, the lettering, and especially the cow and the mario??? lmao
the colors are great!!!

[Patron Poll: Honey Lemon]

the anatomy is not very good,,, the pose isnt correct, and the expression is very vague,,, i think u should work more on ur anatomy and pose,,,

the anatomy part; where ur going wrong is if u look at it, uve got all the proportions right, but
1. the shoulders are uneven,
2. the leg part below the knee is shorter than the leg part above the knee,
3. her face doesnt has a correct shape, and
4. she has 0 forehead and 0 neck.

the pose part; uve drawn her in a 2d position,,, according to what the idea im getting is,,,
1. her leg part below the knee shouldnt even be visible, as it would be hidden behind the leg part above the knee,
2. her whole upper body should be even with ground, and only her hhead would be slightly up (if she wants to look upright), and u should be seeing her neck outstreched
3. her hair would definitely not look like a drape covering the floor

but overall i think u have the capacity to improve,,, so good luck!!

[Niumiko]

kawaii!!~~~~

[019]

weird flex, but ok
(10/10 very good <333)

ff0 responds:

Odd Muscle Contraction But Alright.
( Haha thank you! )

[023]

tharfield is what will welcome me when i reach heaven

ff0 responds:

You can only meet him in Hell.

[024]

wow?? is this my wife??

ff0 responds:

Roll d20 and find out!

Next Time On Dragon Ball Z-

[028]

love this!!

[I do not know what to draw...?]

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