llamawhodraws's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[CM - stingybee]

this is so fucking cute! i love the shadows, and the theme and the composition,,, ohhh just everything!!!

[Lady In Red]

just a tip
i think u should make it more colorful,,, like i get that the overall hue is red, but u can add many more colors to make it pop, for example, u can use purple in the background, dark blue on the dress area, and indigo on skin (all in an overlay or other layer types) to make it slightly more popping,
and i suggest making things darker like shadows and such, and adding highlight, to make it less monotonous
but overall, i love the pose, the expression, and the hands!! keep it up!

DeathBabyPoison responds:

This was actually the purpose of this art, is to be monotonous. It was made during one of the darkest depression episodes I've had and I felt I needed to vent, so I drew this up quickly. Thanks for the info though, but this is just the style I chose to go with. :)
Thanks!!

[Still Lazy pup]

weird flex, but ok
(love this!)

[Hurt Nero]

what a cute boy!!!

[Lowbloods [June 2017]]

HOLY SHIT! THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!

Dronema responds:

Ahh you are so kind, thank you so much!!!! ;___; <33

[Tsurumasa Hayami]

hey man, love ur drawing, the color is great and the character looks awesome!
just can to point out somethings in this,,,
the skin color is not consistent?? like i know skin colour is not even throughout but the hue itself has changed??? like just to point out, the face of the character has warm hues (red yellow orange) but by the time u get to the legs, its cool hues (blue, purple)
and the coloring style also changes as it goes down, in the upper body area, the lineart is crisp and the colors are bright, but as we go down to the legs, the lineart starts blending with colors, and is not as crisp
the pose,,, the body isnt aligned in a proper way, so its very wonky and out of the place,,,

tsusawa responds:

i usually change hue in different ways, on that art i decided to change to warmer in the upper body area, so my art might look more "alive" maybe
and brighter too
the art has some blur as it goes down bc i was asked to do it that way, it was a request
pose... yeah, agreed. but i still think that he looks kinda cute and i'm still learning
thank you for your review!

[Gothtober17- Germaine]

i think the concept and the pose is great, and i love what ur giving
but i would like to give some small criticism that i hope will help u
the colors are not going good together, i think u should use the same (or similar palette) colors to use for shadow and change the layer settings to overlay.
and i think u should focus on anatomy, the pose is really good, but i think u should pay attention to proportion and how thick and thin certain body parts are.
but overall, i really love this piece

Leel-88 responds:

Thanks! I actually do appreciate that. It was a drawing I did from last October, so I'm currently posting older drawings from tumblr since they're going to ban NSFW content.

Other than that I do still agree with what you said and want to say thanks for taking the time to leave a critique!

[Best Gorl]

your colors are great! but i think u should focus on ur anatomy and composition.
i get it, if its meant to be chibi-like, but u have to pay attention to the composition and make the anatomy work. with it
the pose u were going with was good, but i think over all u have not paid attention to her body, and covered it up with the dress. because if u imagine it without the dress, then her legs are either too short, or her spine is doing a backflip.
but the color choice and the way u have done it all is great!!

CreatureDestroyer responds:

Hey thanks so much for the feedback!!! I've always had a lot of trouble with these kind of poses, so I do realize it looks kind of wonky 😅 Thank you for the tips, though! I'll keep working on it!

[Susie]

this looks great! but i think u should still work on the face abit
but overall i love the colors, the composition the pose!! everything is beautiful!

[Parfait]

OMG SO CUTE!!!!
everything is so cute!!!